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Bright_Eyes Junior Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 29Plymouth, MN |
Tears Every day I shed a tear... A silent tear of thanks, A sparkling tear of joy, A crashing tear of anguish, A warm tear of love, A lonely tear of hope... Today my tear was silent, and it was shed for you. ~Becky Peterson |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! First off- WOW! Second off- WOW WOW! Yea I really liked this one. Very good poem. I hope you enjoy your stay here at passions and post more. From what I see in this poem you have talent. Keep posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hi there!! Welcome to this wonderful world. This poem was so good. I'm awaiting more posts!!  ~Carly WhY ShOuLd I Be hypnotized with someone else's lies WhY ShOuLd I Take time and pride in what someone else believes... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Becky! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. Wonderful first post ... I really enjoyed the style, and hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to Passions! What a wonderful post...that was a really amazing piece! Great style and form....I am looking forward to seeing more of your work here! Salma |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Welcome to passions!!! your gonna like it here. Amazing first post. im awaiting moreRegina aka Ina |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Hope you'd like your poetry family in here  Wonderful first post if i may say. You have a different style nad I'm loving it. Thanks for the share and please keep poesting I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey there I'll make this short and simple...what they said  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Welcome To Passions...this put a tear in my eye keep up the excellent work |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
welcome to passions...this was a wonderful first post and i cannot wait to read more..i hope you like all of us here... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! This was a great poem! I cant wait to see more from you! Welcome!! |
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Bright_Eyes Junior Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 29Plymouth, MN |
Thanks everyone for making me feel so welcome. I love Passions already!! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is a really beautiful poem!~! katherine |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Hmmm - what can I say... great poem... you write well and I look forward to hearing more... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very, very good my dear! Welcome, welcome! I look forward to more from you! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
yes, they are right. This was great. Welcome to passions. Hope to see more from you, you have already shown great talent and creativity. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Wow!! Welcome to Passions! Awesome poem! I hope ur stay here is LONG and enjoyable! Keep posting... *Jennifer |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Welcome to Passions awsome first poem I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work don't stop posting. Lauren |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I know it's been said, but  Welcome to Passions I liked your poem and I hope you enjoy a long stay here. keep the poems coming "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
yea, what they said. "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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