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luvnkris
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0 posted 2000-12-22 10:17 PM


It's nearly 6mths i've been with my incredible boyfriend now, i wrote this and most probably will give it to him on our anniversary. Tell me what you think of it pleasems!?!?
Thanks.
Luv Jo
xoxo

I NEVER IMAGINED YOU WOULD LOVE ME AS MUCH AS YOU DO

Nearly a year and a half ago now I was new to school
And I saw you
And I liked you
You were senior school, year 11, while I was year 9
I never told anyone of my secret crush on you
And I never imagined you would one day love me

About 11mths ago now, I got your icq number
And I chatted with you
And I liked you
You were “in love” with someone and told me all about her
I never told you of my secret crush on you
And I never imagined you would one day love me

Around 6 and a half mths ago now, you became single
And I was there for you
And I loved you
You were so upset, I just talked with you
I still couldn’t tell you bout my secret crush on you
And I never imagined you would one day love me

A few days later, you wanted someone new
And I wanted you
And I love you
You were so convinced no-one would want you
I told you then of my secret crush on you
And I never imagined you would one day love me

A few minutes later, I got scared
And I quit the chat
And I went to bed, dreaming of you
I thought I’d blown our friendship
I had told you of my secret crush on you
And I never imagined you would one day love me

The next morning I went on the computer
And I saw how you felt
And I loved you more
You wanted me too, to give things a try
No longer was my crush a secret
And I never imagined you’d one day love me as much as you do

Now, 6mths later, we are together still
And i love you
And you love me
We are soulmates, never to part
You are mine forever
I never imagined love could be this strong.



*Thankyou Kristian for these last 6mths, you’ll never know how greatly you have impacted my life in this short time. I have come to love you so greatly, and I know you love me just as much. Forever is what you said, Together*




* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



© Copyright 2000 Jo - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-12-23 07:23 AM


Very nice Jo ... you've described the sequence of events that lead up to this happiness, and I'm sure he'll appreciate it!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-12-23 08:38 AM


Wow... this is wonderful!! I'm sure he'll love it~!
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

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3 posted 2000-12-23 08:52 PM


Yea i definately think that your bf will like this   It was really sweet and your very lucky to have such a wonderful guy in your life   Great poem!
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4 posted 2000-12-24 12:07 PM


This was sweet.
Hope he likes it.



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Melster
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5 posted 2000-12-24 03:51 AM


Great Job, I say go ahead...  give it to him, then he will know how you feel even more
!!

Melz!!


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6 posted 2000-12-25 11:19 PM


this is really a very good way of summing up your feelings and appreciation for someone.  Yes, you should give this to him.  

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7 posted 2000-12-26 01:16 AM


Give it to him. What kind of guy wouldnt want a sweet poem like this???

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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8 posted 2000-12-26 10:09 AM



  Super job, give give give!!

   ~Carly

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9 posted 2000-12-27 12:33 PM


I just have to say that I love how this is written, it's awesome.  You should definitely give it to him, he should love it.

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