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I never imagined you would love me as much as you do
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I never imagined you would love me as much as you do |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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It's nearly 6mths i've been with my incredible boyfriend now, i wrote this and most probably will give it to him on our anniversary. Tell me what you think of it pleasems!?!? Thanks. Luv Jo xoxo I NEVER IMAGINED YOU WOULD LOVE ME AS MUCH AS YOU DO Nearly a year and a half ago now I was new to school And I saw you And I liked you You were senior school, year 11, while I was year 9 I never told anyone of my secret crush on you And I never imagined you would one day love me About 11mths ago now, I got your icq number And I chatted with you And I liked you You were “in love” with someone and told me all about her I never told you of my secret crush on you And I never imagined you would one day love me Around 6 and a half mths ago now, you became single And I was there for you And I loved you You were so upset, I just talked with you I still couldn’t tell you bout my secret crush on you And I never imagined you would one day love me A few days later, you wanted someone new And I wanted you And I love you You were so convinced no-one would want you I told you then of my secret crush on you And I never imagined you would one day love me A few minutes later, I got scared And I quit the chat And I went to bed, dreaming of you I thought I’d blown our friendship I had told you of my secret crush on you And I never imagined you would one day love me The next morning I went on the computer And I saw how you felt And I loved you more You wanted me too, to give things a try No longer was my crush a secret And I never imagined you’d one day love me as much as you do Now, 6mths later, we are together still And i love you And you love me We are soulmates, never to part You are mine forever I never imagined love could be this strong. *Thankyou Kristian for these last 6mths, you’ll never know how greatly you have impacted my life in this short time. I have come to love you so greatly, and I know you love me just as much. Forever is what you said, Together* * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nice Jo ... you've described the sequence of events that lead up to this happiness, and I'm sure he'll appreciate it!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow... this is wonderful!! I'm sure he'll love it~! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea i definately think that your bf will like this It was really sweet and your very lucky to have such a wonderful guy in your life Great poem! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was sweet. Hope he likes it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Job, I say go ahead... give it to him, then he will know how you feel even more !! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is really a very good way of summing up your feelings and appreciation for someone. Yes, you should give this to him. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Give it to him. What kind of guy wouldnt want a sweet poem like this??? People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Super job, give give give!! ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I just have to say that I love how this is written, it's awesome. You should definitely give it to him, he should love it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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