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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: weird style......poem sucks....hope you enjoy! hehe Pay Up: Bah! Bah! Off! Away! Bah! Bah! No, wait stay! Mind a frost. Soul to kill. Beware mine eyes Fear of chill. Gloom delight A jaded mess. Brain shot out Caused a mess. Bah! Bah! Stop! Don't go! Bah! Bah! It's love you owe!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
"Bah! Bah! Off! Away! Bah! Bah! No, wait stay!" lol....i thought that was the funniest thing ive read for a while. Regina |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey bro. This was really koo. My fave stanza was the one Regina noted. Keep kickin! ~Carly< !signature--> WhY ShOuLd I Be hypnotized by someone else's lies WhY ShOuLd I Take time and pride in what someone else believes... [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I like this Dopey, it dont suck. It's awesome, as usual. Please read No One WOuld Care, by me. Love you. And don be scared of my poem, it's about my past, aiite? I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This doesn't suck.  It's definitly interesting though! And it is different from your normal posts.... variety is the spice of life!xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
well this was interesting it was different, but very funny... and it all rhymed... wonderful post... Salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, I did enjoy it, and I don't think it sucks. A weird style, from you? Noooooo, how could that be?!? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem... it is always good to see variety in here!! Good Work!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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