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-=I Need You=-
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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-=I Need You=- I need you to love me, to tell me I'm the one. I need you to hold me, 'till the stars are forever hidden by the sun. I need to know you care, and this isnt just a phase. I need you to show me your love, so I can feel you in my heart always. I need you to never giveup, to show me the strength of our love. I need you to tell me you'll always be there, 'till you're sent to heaven above. I'm nothing without you, my mind, body, and soul, only you complete. I'm pouring out my heart, and... I need you to need me. "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is exactly how i feel right now...dont worry hun..YOUR NOT ALONE!!  I feel like this is exactly what i need to show him so hopefully he'll answer some of my questions that i've been pondering over for a while trying to come up with the answers...Great poem tho..i really liked it!! I can definately relate... |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Hey good poem, when I was going out I showed him how much I needed him. Soon enough he figered out that I did, nice talking to you and Mollie. Bye Minna A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This poem was sooo sweet! it's exactly what i want from my boyfriends to come. hopefully they'll accept my wishes and need me too. great poem! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
" And I tied her heart in ribbons I tied her heart in ribbons I tied her heart in ribbons and in bows. And I'm gone, oh yes I'm gone. And I'm lost without you I'm lost within you. And I'm gone....So gone.... Long gone." - Smashing Pumpkins You oughta feel this one.... anyway great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
xshugarhighx~ hey!! We really need to talk sometime! we seem to have alot in common. thanks for replying PrettyGirly~ hey babe! im glad you worked things out, nice talking to you too curlygurley~ well good luck with your guy! i hope everything goes the way you want it to dopeydope~ hey! what in the heck was that supposed to mean? lol that because i told him i neededd him he said he was gone...hmm thanks for makin me feel 500% better!~!~!  "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this poem is really well done, it expresses what so many people need in their relationships. Great poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
"I need you to need me" you expressed that so well in this poem Nice job IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey sweet peach  this is awesome, one of your best so far. at least my favorite amongst all your pieces so far. probably cause i know the inside meaning into it a bit. so, whats going on? you seem to be very happy and im glad you are. talk to you later sweets or peach  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Lakewalker* Hey there! THanks for replying..means alot as alwaysIsGona* thanks for replying!! acire* Hey babe!! yep..hidden meanings are everywhere these days Things are alright i guess..COULD be better..but oh well. LOL get this...Ryan's little brother, who is really my age, asked me to their christmas dance lol lol "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Love is great when you have it but when you lose it that's the worst feeling in the world. But anyway excelent poem and keep up the awsome work. And always be greatful for what you have because when you have nothing left you really wish you still did. Lauren |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
TopGunLauren~~ hey hey!! Thanks for replying..and what you said was soooo true. thanks again!! ~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hi, my name is FORREST BUMP "life is like a box of chocolates, you can never really taste how sweet it is unless you have one" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
ha, forrest bump, that's funny  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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