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a peak into my world |
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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
i've fallen hard and now im hurt. im in a strange place, i've never been here before. its all so foreign to me. something feels broken. i made a pretty loud thump as i fellto the ground. theres a sharp painful stinging in my chest. i lie down, and curl myself into a ball, and just cry. i've been lying here for days. my wound still hasnt healed. i've begun to think it'll never subside. the waves of pain are immense. all of a sudden i see someone approaches. a stranger with smiling eyes and wavy blonde hair. i build a nice sturdy mote around myself quikly. i decorate it nicely and paint a picture on it of a smiling giggling happy girl. so now im safe in my little mote, nothing can ever come in, and nothing can ever come out. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
We all have a face that we hide behind when we are afraid to let anything out or anything in. You describe your feelings very well. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a good poem. I hope all is well and i surely hope to see you post more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow...this was great. i know what ure going through..hang in there *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I know how you feel, I have spent the last 6 months hiding from how I feel and what has happened to me, but trust me, hiding doesn't solve anything, eventually we have to release ourselves and move on... but trust me, youcan't do that until you are ready... in the mean time, keep yourself happy and don't do anything till you are ready!! Great poem - we are always here for you! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
You just told my life story....cept I haven't seen any strangers yet. Great job, and keep writing...it helps... ~Carly |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
great job with the poem. hope all is well. eveything is gonna be ok. hope to see more. Regina |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
*bump*  ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of expressing this poem! If this is how you feel, I hope things get better soon. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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