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broken love, found love
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broken love, found love |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
To Dave- It started out that I didn't want to date you cause you were leaving going on to something better I remember you had tears in your eyes, mine too the next days we didn't talk as much as us to I was sad I always cryed and I wasn't happy but as months passed we were growing together I didn't want to believe it but my dreams showed me the way to love was you no one else I'd cry over you cause I missed you I remember you'd be sad cause you missed me you said Minna I love you so much, your so sweet; all I could think of is could love work where; ever you are? I guess it can if it's true love I said "do you want to go out with me" you said "yes" now we are a couple I love you very much when you leave don't forget these That I love you your always in my heart I'll never forget you.. Love Always, ~*~Minna~*~ A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Very nice contribution. I'm glad that you have this new found love, and I pray that it will last for you. Good luck. God Bless, tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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David Generous Junior Member
since 2000-12-15
Posts 13 |
Minna that peom is so sweet and from the heart, I can't explain with words how much I love your poem.. What you Wrote is so true and sweet.... I want to thank you for being so sweet and being with me... Most of all I love you so very much, and I won't forget those words from you.... |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem... You are a wonderful person and you deserve every happiness in the world!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your poems amaze me cause you really just pour your heart out into it. Like us readers are placed close enough to your situation to see what you go thru. Your poems indeed are more personal than the others, and you pen them magnificently. I don't know if i'm making any sense at all, but the way i feel for your poems just is hard to put to words. thanks for sharing this Minna  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job as usual! I think what acire's reply said is how I feel about your work most of the time. Keep them coming! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful poem Minna.  I love your honesty and your open show of feelings. P.S. True love knows nothing of time or distance Live and let live. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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