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Who killed my dreams? Who helped me pick them back up?
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Who killed my dreams? Who helped me pick them back up? |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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Who killed my dreams? The people who said "he wont make it." Who helped me pick them back up? You mom, you said "they'll see someday." Who killed my dreams? The teachers who never gave me a chance. Who helped me pick them back up? You,lisa, who always said, "dont worry just keep trying" Who killed my dreams when They were at the top? My mom when she stepped on me and squashed everything I thought I had. Who helped me pick them back up? No one!! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
There will be lots of times when you will be the only one around to pick up the pieces. It makes you strong. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
And u always think someone will help u fufill your dreams. Well no matter. do what u want and crush everyone who tries and stopu. Regina |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You will one day realize you can only rely on yourself. I'm sorry this is happening to you, but it will make you stronger. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
All you can rely on is yourself, and sometimes you might even let yourself down, but don't give up. Nice poem Branden. Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Branden, sorry about what's going on. I hope things get better dude.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I don't know if this is a real one or hypothetical, but if it's happening I hope you find the strength in you to pick yourself up. Nice job of expressing this one! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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