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branden726
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0 posted 2000-12-21 09:57 AM


Who killed my dreams?
The people who said "he wont make it."

Who helped me pick them back up?
You mom, you said "they'll see someday."

Who killed my dreams?
The teachers who never gave me a chance.

Who helped me pick them back up?
You,lisa, who always said, "dont worry just keep trying"

Who killed my dreams when They were at the top?
My mom when she stepped on me and squashed everything I thought I had.

Who helped me pick them back up?
No one!!

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1 posted 2000-12-21 10:35 AM


There will be lots of times when you will be the only one around to pick up the pieces. It makes you strong. Thanks for sharing.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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2 posted 2000-12-21 12:13 PM


And u always think someone will help u fufill your dreams. Well no matter. do what u want and crush everyone who tries and stopu.
Regina

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3 posted 2000-12-21 02:16 PM


You will one day realize you can only rely on yourself. I'm sorry this is happening to you, but it will make you stronger.
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

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4 posted 2000-12-21 06:00 PM


All you can rely on is yourself, and sometimes you might even let yourself down, but don't give up. Nice poem Branden.     Jon
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5 posted 2000-12-22 01:53 AM


Branden, sorry about what's going on. I hope things get better dude.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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6 posted 2000-12-26 11:13 AM


I don't know if this is a real one or hypothetical, but if it's happening I hope you find the strength in you to pick yourself up.  Nice job of expressing this one!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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