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sweetypie5
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0 posted 2000-12-18 07:01 PM


I don't know where you came from
Or why you were given to me
But I am thankful
For all you have given to me

You make me laugh
You make me cry
Your always there
Through hard times

Friends forever!
That's what we'll be
Through the boy trouble
And through old friends
We'll stay together
True to the very end


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1 posted 2000-12-18 07:10 PM


What a wonderful tribute for a friend.  Seems like this friend of yours truly means a lot to you.  I don't really know who it is, but i do have a pretty good guess    well, maybe I'm wrong, but you 2 girls names sweet seem really close.  Hope you 2 stay together forever as friends.  Thanks for the wonderful read

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2 posted 2000-12-18 07:47 PM


Wow what a wonderful tribute to me........i'm so touched.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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IsGona
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3 posted 2000-12-19 12:17 PM


lol@DD
Nice poem SP5.  It was a very nice tribute to a friend.

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
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Melster
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4 posted 2000-12-19 12:43 PM


Good poem - you are lucky to have a friend like this as they are often hard to find!  

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

apsara
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5 posted 2000-12-19 10:32 AM


Heartwarming tribute. Must have been a real special friend. Great read.

apsara

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6 posted 2000-12-19 10:48 AM


It's wonderful to have friends that make you feel this way. You describe the feelings well. Thank you for sharing this with us!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-12-20 03:57 PM


Great feelings you've shared here, good job on the poem!!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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8 posted 2000-12-21 03:55 PM


Aww this is such a sweet poem!! I liked it a lot hun  
katherine
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9 posted 2000-12-22 07:18 AM


wow so sweet!

katherine

Ina
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10 posted 2000-12-22 11:09 AM


beautiful trubut e to a friend....
Regina

TopGunLauren
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11 posted 2000-12-22 09:38 PM


  I loved this poem because lately me and my best friend have been fighting a lot a, but everything your poem says is true. It's a beautiful poem keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

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12 posted 2000-12-23 05:51 PM


Well what a wonderful piece i must say. This shows true friendship right here. If this doesnt say "I love you" in a friend kinda way well...i dont know what does.
                  Branden

sweetstuff101
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13 posted 2000-12-24 08:30 PM


Wow was that for me???
No no no I bet it was for Ryan....hehehe j/k!!!!
But thanx for everything you've done for me, I can't ever repay you.
And the poem....it was really really good!!!! Keep writing!!!

Much Love,
Your bestest friend in the world....I think!

Merry Christmas!!!  
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[This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-24-2000).]

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