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branden726
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0 posted 2000-12-21 09:43 AM


Christmas is not christmas unless you have that someone special there,

If you finally realize when your sitting down with your friends and family that you miss the one you love,

Dont forget theres always something called a phone.

I want the person i love to be with me on that special day,

But instead she is leaving me, to get away from her pain, and to find happiness in family across the states,

I wont be able to pick up the phone, Say "I love you hun"

I will miss what I wish would so much stay here,

But in the mean time I will let all the special people I love around me know,

That I love them

Care for them,

And will always be there for them.

So if you dont give presents,gifts,money,or cards make sure you give them love.

[This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 12-21-2000).]

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Ina
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1 posted 2000-12-21 12:15 PM


it was beautiful. I wish my special person, brad could be here. But he cant so ill try hard to surround myself with friends who care.
Merry christmas
Regina

jeremydraul
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2 posted 2000-12-21 10:15 PM


you are very sincere in your writing... great emphasis on love and the holidays, great job

jeremy r

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3 posted 2000-12-22 02:01 AM


Great writing branden, all you say is so true. Hope your christmas is filled with love!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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katherine
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4 posted 2000-12-22 07:08 AM


this is so sweet and so beautiful!

katherine

branden726
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5 posted 2000-12-23 05:45 PM


Well thanks, im sorry for not replying and letting me know how u felt about this poem. Yes jermy i do write very sincer and i try to keep it happy but i cant always and well i just love writting thanks for the replys

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


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6 posted 2000-12-26 12:39 PM


I hope your holidays went well, nice job on the poem!

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