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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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I've had a very enjoyable stay here at passions and I can't believe I have posted so much (2000 posts now!). It really doesn't seem like I've been here this long or that I've done so many replies. Everyone keep writing, it's the only way you'll improve  And now, a poem:When, Daddy, When? When will the reindeer get here Daddy, where is Santa now? You mean he visits the whole world, how Daddy, how? Santa steps in his big sleigh, traveling with his reindeer fast, stopping by each house, none passed, bringing toys so kids can play. But when will the reindeer get here Daddy, where is Santa now? You say "just wait and be patient," but how Daddy, how? Santa will be here tonight, but Christmas is more than gifts, it's about the Lord who lifts, and you'll learn that when it's right. So when will the reindeer get here Daddy, where is Santa now? How do I get to sleep tonight, how Daddy, how? Lakewalker December 9, 2000 "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
look its santa!!!!:P no seriously i liked the way father and son talked. Regina |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
cool! in my point of view, a childs lamintation. awesome!! ya know i love ya Lakey! Happy Holidays, i might not be back untill January 2 or 3 I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like the way you used different rhyme schemes for the father and son. Cute poem...now look over here! /pip/Forum3/HTML/000761.html |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
A santa poem - how wonderful... I love christmas and santa! At 18 years I am still believing in him and he keeps coming too... all you have to do is believe... Merry Christmas to you all!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Lake, this is a beautiful 2000th post! Thank you for blessing us with your presence here at Passions, you really help make it a wonderful place. Here's to another 2000! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem lake.....and congrats on the 2000......  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
  Congratulations on 2,000 Lake! What a wonderful, seasonal poem ... I loved the conversational feel in this, Nicely written! Merry Christmas and best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Just another post in the forums??? Hell no this isnt. Its another Great poem posted in the forums lakewalker. Hey dude I love the poem okay. keep writting cuz i enjoy reading "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thanks you everyone, and I appreciate the replies "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
congrats on 2000!!! i liked this post a lot.... very cute, u should post it in holiday cheer, isn't that still around? well it's great to be back and get to read everyones writing again! well hope to see more... Salma |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job, Lakewalker! I truly enjoyed this poem. It's great. I like how you put together the whole "how daddy, when daddy" asking daddy thing. Great job! ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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