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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-17 08:24 PM


Note: In this poem, “giving head” means playing with short hair. It’s sort of an inside joke going around my school.

I love to stare,
Into your eyes.
And when you smile,
I’m mesmerized.

I love your dimples,
They’re just so cute.
When I close my eyes,
I see your face.

I love to play,
With your hair.
I love it so much when it’s short,
And, I can “give you head”.

I love everything,
About you.
From your eyes,
To your dimples.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-12-17 08:38 PM


This is something to be cherished!
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2 posted 2000-12-17 08:47 PM


your all nasty! a bunch of gross people! just kidding, looks like you've reeled in a winner, best of luck and great poem!

jeremy r

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3 posted 2000-12-17 09:03 PM


I love to give head then! I GIVE HEAD!!!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Melster
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4 posted 2000-12-17 11:42 PM


Good work - but I think the wording may be taken the wrong way by some people even though you have told us of the proper meaning and the way you intended for it to be meant!

Melz!!

apsara
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5 posted 2000-12-18 04:08 AM


My heads off, I mean my hats off to you. This is pure and sincere. Great job. Hmm, we learn something new everyday.

apsara

Tamma
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6 posted 2000-12-18 07:55 PM


Yea, well, i got that offa one of my really good friends...and now, justin done got his hair cut  

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7 posted 2000-12-20 02:55 PM


You know, I really don't like giving head...  
Riggghhht, I like long hair.  
Now I can say stuff, and people will think I mean something innocent, this works.  
xoxo
Jenn

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8 posted 2000-12-20 04:45 PM


Good job on this one!

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Tamma
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9 posted 2000-12-20 04:52 PM


hehe...I get some weird looks whenever I tell someone that I was "Giving Justin Head" hehehehe

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