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Please, Tell Me it was Only a Dream
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Please, Tell Me it was Only a Dream |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I cried as you walked away, < !signature-->I couldn’t believe it was really over. You turned back once, And saw my tears. It looked like you wanted to cry, But you quickly turned away. Everyone tried to comfort me, But I just wanted you. I stood there watching you walk away, Knowing I could do nothing. I prayed that you would come back, And tell me it was a mistake. My tears began to hit the ground, And form a puddle at my feet. Slowly, I open my eyes, I didn’t know it was possible… I had soaked my sheets and my pillow, All from the tears I cried in my sleep. Could this have all been a dream, And he’s still in love with me? ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ Note: This is not a dream I had, the words jsut came to me  Things are doing great between Justin and I. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A frightful dream, Tamma. I hope it never comes true for you. You describe the sadness and the fear very well in this piece. Thanks for posting.< !signature--> "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
That would not be a good dream to have and I hope this never happens, but great writing! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You had me a little worried while reading this - till I got to the note!! I am glad all is well! It is a good poem though! Melz!! keep in!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was great! You had me scared too....please.....put the note BEFORE hand next time hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Hope that never comes true. Had me for a while there. Great read. apsara |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i agree w/ you guys that i thought it was true.that would be one dream nobody ever wants to come true. great emotion... regina |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
heh...sorry, I didn't mean to scare ya'll. I originally didn't even have the "note" Things are great between Justin and I. If i ever get to see him, for all this snow. ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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