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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-17 09:02 AM


I cried as you walked away,
I couldn’t believe it was really over.

You turned back once,
And saw my tears.

It looked like you wanted to cry,
But you quickly turned away.

Everyone tried to comfort me,
But I just wanted you.

I stood there watching you walk away,
Knowing I could do nothing.

I prayed that you would come back,
And tell me it was a mistake.

My tears began to hit the ground,
And form a puddle at my feet.

Slowly, I open my eyes,
I didn’t know it was possible…

I had soaked my sheets and my pillow,
All from the tears I cried in my sleep.

Could this have all been a dream,
And he’s still in love with me?

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~

Note: This is not a dream I had, the words jsut came to me   Things are doing great between Justin and I.


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1 posted 2000-12-17 10:24 AM


A frightful dream, Tamma. I hope it never comes true for you. You describe the sadness and the fear very well in this piece. Thanks for posting.< !signature-->

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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2 posted 2000-12-17 03:17 PM


That would not be a good dream to have and I hope this never happens, but great writing!

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Melster
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3 posted 2000-12-17 06:50 PM


You had me a little worried while reading this - till I got to the note!!  I am glad all is well!  It is a good poem though!

Melz!!  keep  in!!

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4 posted 2000-12-17 09:06 PM


this was great! You had me scared too....please.....put the note BEFORE hand next time hehe



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5 posted 2000-12-18 04:42 AM


Hope that never comes true. Had me for a while there. Great read.

apsara

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6 posted 2000-12-18 10:59 AM


i agree w/ you guys that i thought it was true.that would be one dream nobody ever wants to come true. great emotion...
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Tamma
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7 posted 2000-12-20 07:02 PM


heh...sorry, I didn't mean to scare ya'll. I originally didn't even have the "note"  

Things are great between Justin and I. If i ever get to see him, for all this snow.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


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