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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
What i dreamed of when i was younger was to sing to the world big hopes big wishes seemed so close for a little girl but now the dreams keep drifting farther and farther away i wish i could just hold on to them atleast for one more day its not the pain that eats at me its the emptyness inside the emptyness i feel for the dream i never tried |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
It's never too late. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
wow this was really good!!! i liked it a lot. I hope the dream isn't lost forever, just temporarily.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
A dream only dies if you let it!! Keep hold of your dream and never let it exceed your grasp! One day your dream will come true! Melz!! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Wow. I know how you feel but its never to late to try living your dreams. Someone wise said that to me one day. Great job. apsara |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
thats a great poem i know just how you feel but one thing iv realized is that its never too late to try for something Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was amazing...I really loved it a lot. Like everyone else already said---it's never too late. If your dream is to sing to the world...then make it your goal and I hope you achieve your goal. Good luck & never stop trying. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ditto to the others and nice job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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