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hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-12-17 03:24 PM

i died tonight
i heard your word
looked in your eyes
lost my sight
while dry tears fell
on empty ears
i couldn't save you
so i let you be
what can i do
but give you a tear
so you'll remember me

Swift as a shadow, short as any dream;
Brief as the lightning in the collied night,
That in a spleen unfolds both heaven and earth,
And ere a ma

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

1 posted 2000-12-17 06:57 PM

Umm - yeah well umm what can I say? I am a little unsure of the meaning of this - I like it though! Good job!!

Melz!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-12-17 09:09 PM

this was great. SO sad though.....i hope all is well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2000-12-17 10:51 PM

this is dejecting... so sad, good post.

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

apsara
Member

since 2000-11-09

Posts 70