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The distance i would travel............
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The distance i would travel............ |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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The Distance I Would Travel The distance I would travel to be with you, I would go across the seas to see you happy, I would travel across the desert sand to hold your hand, To touch your skin for one time only, Would make my wishes come true 1 thousand times, I would travel the world only if you promised me when I return ill be the one u hold. I would travel,do anything almost anything just to be with you, my love is strong for you, Nothing will change that. I want u to know that love can never be controlled. i dont like this one but hey i tryed. tell me what u think |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful love poem. There is no mountain that love won't cross, and distance is nothing when you feel these things for someone. You describe the feelings well. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
how lovely, yet serene and real. great post jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was beautiful!! And sooo sweet too!! It reminded me of someone special to me. I really liked this one. Keep writing!! Much luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this one is excellent, I really like how you wrote it. Nice job Branden  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Branden im going to have to say that this poem SUCKED!!!!!!! haha no im playing......anyway i think the message and theme of this poem is very very sweet. Good job on this one pal.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
I loved the meaning behind this one. Good read. apsara |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Good poem Branden, I too was reminded of someone special to me and I thank you for that!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I want u to know that love can never be controlled =========================================== Branden, you wrote such a romantic poem... The above quote, which you placed at end of the poem speaks volumes... I enjoyed the read and the expression here is soooooooooo sweet coco |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
well, thank you all im glad i can remind you of someone special, i mean when i write, i write with tons of meaning i want you to know that there will not be one poem of my mine that doesnt try to express how i feel at the moment thanks! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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