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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
The road was dark and dreary < !signature-->The path was rarley walked But you came along with me Not showing an ounce of fear I don't know how you did it And I don't really care All I know is that you were there... You were there when I was crying When I was ready to end it all The pain was unbearable But you were there to help me through it You helped me through all the pain And all the sorrow You never looked down on me You just were there.... You pushed me forward And never let me fall For that my friend I am thankful I felt like dieing You felt like crying But we made it through some how Because you were there... The time has come for us to part But I will never forget the day That you were there So know this and never forget it That whatever day or time The year will not matter For any reason what so ever I will be there... This poem was wrote about a friendship that my friend and I had...It sadly came to an end for a stupid reason. I hope that she will read this and see that I still love her and I will never forgive the help she gave me. I want her to know that I will always be there. You know who you are... When boys are four they will give you thier gum, but when they are forteen they won't even give you the time of day... [This message has been edited by sweetypie5 (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
When I lost my best friend because of a guy...It was the worst...I lost her trust but I gained a new friend...We are friends again but not as close because of someone else...And I feel that there is a reason for it...And honestly it hurts but I dont care anymore...Im not gonna be the lost little puppy that follows her around all her life...If she wants my friendship then its up to her to get it...Not mine to give and be rejected of it...Catch my drift??? If she really wants to be your friend she will come around... I dont think you should wait for your friend to read this...You should give it to her... Good work on this one!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
hey Steph! I know what you are going through (obviously) because we are kinda going through this together. Just remember I will always be here when you need me, that's what friends are for. And all she needs is time and she will see that this is not what she wanted and maybe be willing to be your friend again. Well your poem was excellent, and I loved it. Keep up the great work!! I look forward to reading more of your work soon!!! Lylas, Priscilla PS~ Happy Birthday!!!!!< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ ~*~ WhAt CaN U dO wHeN tHe oNly 1 wHo CaN mAkE U sToP cRyiNg, iS tHe 1 WhO MaDe U sTaRt? ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great. First off happy b-day from what i read prior......and i liked this one..........keep it up!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this poem is really well done. It flowed good and had a sincere emotion in it. I like it and I hope everything can work out good between you and your friend  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Hey peeps please reply to this poem... When boys are four they will give you thier gum, but when they are forteen they won't even give you the time of day... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Don't even rely on her reading this poem. The way i look at it, just go talk to her about how you're feeling. Belive me, that's the best way to do it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Awesome poem! I know how you feel, I've been through it too, sorta. Great job! Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Awesome poem! I know how you feel, I've been through it too, sorta. Great job! Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
i really liked this poem.. i know how ya feel!! i hope all works out between both of you.. good luck! Slim "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
When you have a friend like this your extremely lucky..it was a great poem but i'm just sorry to hear that the friendship came to an end. I hope that you guys can repare it. |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
This is a repost....please reply!!! thanx sweetypie5... |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This poem had a lot of feeling in it...it was really good. I'm really sorry to hear that you're friendship is ending, because when you have someone like this it's so hard to lose them. I hope everything works out okay. |
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