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Jesica Young
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Jesica Young |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Good-Bye, that word has broken hearts, and blinded eyes with tears. Good-Bye they say when one departs, I only knew her two years. I bet your in heaven with your mom and dad, as happy as can be. But why did that man be so cruel, and take you away from me. Why? Everyone asks, like Someone has the answer. Well no-one does and no-one will, it's like trying to find a cure for cancer. This poem has no meaning to you, unless you are Allysa. In that case hello friend, Good-Bye Jesie I'll miss ya! In my heart, you'll always lie, but for now Jesie I must say, Good-Bye! This Poem is for my friend Jesica who was murderd along with her mom and her brothers father. Her Ex-stapfather killed her out of Jealousy. I hate him and so does Allysa. I miss Jesica and hope in time we all can be healed but never forget: *~~~Jesica Ann Young~~~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so sad and i send my prayers for things to get better and better with time. Anyway I hope that things are ok there. I tried to help you with HOW TO POST A POEM..... i hope it worked, if not......then oh well......if you look in like 3 of the poems you asked how to....i answered in all three. Anyway Welcome to Passions and i hope you enjoy your stay here. Nice to have you aboard.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome to Passions, Hallie! I know about Jesica from reading Allysa's poems about her, so I'm sorry for the loss. Your poem was a great first post. Once again, Welcome! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Great job on this, I have read Allysa's poems about Jessica too. I hope you enjoy it here! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, this was so touching...I can feel my heart starting to cry...I'll be praying for you, and Allysa too....so good, so good... |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Hey yall, Thanks again for posting your reply's. Thank you Dopey for helping me and yes it is appreciated emensly. I think time will get us through our troubles, so I'll be standing here waiting.I'm going to post another poem shortly. Once again Thank You! Catherine!!! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
You really expressed your emotions well here. Hope things get better. Best Regards IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Hallie_Angel! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us. This was a very emtional and heart-filled first post. I am so sorry for your loss. You've expressed your feelings well in this sorrowful poem, and I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets. (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This poem was soooooo sad!! I am so sorry that something like this happened in your life. It was a great poem but like i said b4..i'm very sorry to hear that. Looking forward to reading more!! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey Catherine!!! Call me later!!! Anyways, awesome poem!!! You're my best friend!!! I had too much applesauce at lunch time, the after effects are just kicking in!!! C-ya tommorow! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hey! Welcome to Passions! And great poem. It was very sad, but you and your friend's family are in my prayers. Just know that here at Passions, you can feel free to talk to any of us about anything. Great poem, and thanks for the good read! *Jennifer |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
~*bump*~ I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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