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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-12-14 10:19 PM

NOTE: Big time blah

If Heaven Had a Time Zone:

If heaven had a time zone
Would it be six?
My mother died years ago.
It's love that I miss.

If heaven had a time zone
Would it be eight?
Wondering my color way,
And realize it's fate.

If heaven had a time zone
Would it be ten?
I live in a rubble house.
I call it my pen.

If heaven had a time zone
Would it be twelve?
Is death deeper than life's breeze?
That's something to delve.

If heaven had a time zone
Would it be two?
A place to live happily.
A state that is true.

If heaven had a time zone
Would it be four?
I walk up the steps of life,
And open the door.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

1 posted 2000-12-14 10:35 PM

I'm guessing this has something to do with the way you moved around so much, but I'm not sure. I enjoyed it regardless if I understood the timezone thing or not. Thx for the posting
IsGona< !signature-->

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

[This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-14-2000).]

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2000-12-14 11:39 PM

interesting "delving" here. I like that word, i think i will use it often now, thanks! great poem

Jeremy R.

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

3 posted 2000-12-15 12:24 PM

awesome poem man really deep i think i can relate a lot (think, that is, if i understood it right) great job

Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

4 posted 2000-12-15 05:39 AM

Missing a parent is always hard! My dad died when I was 2 and I don't remember him! I always love peoms about things like heaven because It makes me think of dad - and I can't do that too often! THanks for helping me remember! It is a good poem and it's not Blah!!

Love Melz!!

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2000-12-15 08:12 AM

Dopey, this is awesome no matter how my I don't understand it anyways, I g2g, so ttyl, I love you. Bye

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2000-12-15 10:47 PM

Hey there. This kicked, I liked it much. Je t'aime!(I think i said that right..)

~Carly

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2000-12-16 10:59 PM

I guess I found this poem interesting more than anything else. It has me thinking about stuff and that's an awesome thing to do with a poem. nice job.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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