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Melster
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since 2000-12-09
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Brisbane, Qld, Australia

0 posted 2000-12-15 06:01 AM


Our Reunion

We never got to say good-bye,
There's soo many things we never did
Im glad for no good-byes,
Good-byes are too hard to do!

I look forward to joyous reunions
When you return at Christmas time,
Although it isn't long we have,
It will be great to see you again.

Yes I await your return at Christmas time,
But I have my fears as well,
I dread you'll tell me you met someone
And you love them all the same.

I guess only time will tell,
When I see you at Christmas time,
I wish you were here to tell this to
And that you were here for me to share!

But for now I'll sit here dreaming
That our reunion is a joyous one,
I know however no matter what
We will be friends forever!


Michael - I don't know whether our reunion is going to be good or not - soo much has happened since you have been gone!  I hope that we can figure things out better than we did before!

Love Melz!

© Copyright 2000 Melanie Heagney - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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1 posted 2000-12-15 07:28 AM


You've expressed the difficulty of separation by distance well Melz ... I hope your reunion is a happy one! Nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

2 posted 2000-12-15 10:50 AM


Good poem, I hope all goes well

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-12-15 04:55 PM


Good luck with all that and good poem. Hope to see more!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
USA
4 posted 2000-12-15 05:52 PM


Hopefully your reunion will be better than mine was, but anyway he was a jerk(i've got better names for him). just keep your hopes up, keep smilin  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
5 posted 2000-12-16 12:29 PM


Thanks again guys - I have a lot to work through with Michael...  but I know he's not a jerk, we are too close!  I will keep you all posted!!

Love Melz!!

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
6 posted 2000-12-16 12:42 PM


reunions are plentiful in the emotional aspect of life... hope alls well

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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7 posted 2000-12-16 11:02 PM


I liked this poem and think you did a good job on it.  Try not to concentrate on your bad thoughts, think of it going exactly how you want!  Again, nice job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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