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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-14 10:43 AM




I’ll love you forever,
This is my vow to you.

I'll hold you close for life,
I’ll try my best to smile,
No matter why it hurts,
This is my vow to you.

My love runs deep for you,
This is my vow to you.

I’ll admit my mistakes,
And forget about yours,
So we can grow closer,
This is my vow to you.

I’ll hold you when you need,
Let you go if you want,
If it kills me or not,
This is my vow to you.

I’ll love you ‘til I die,
This is my vow to you.

I’ll forget what they say,
And go one loving you,
For as long as you want,
This is my vow to you.

I will not forget you,
This is my vow to you.

No matter what, it’s true,
I love I hold for you,
I’ve let you in my heart,
This is my vow to you.

My love for you won’t die,
This is my vow to you.

Please, take my hand, and see,
Just how deep my love runs,
I’ll love you forever,
This is my vow to you.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~
~*~ Forever ~*~
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~*~ Tamma ~*~




[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-14-2000).]

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ZAOfreak
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1 posted 2000-12-14 02:42 PM


Wow. That is quite a vow! I hope that Justin can understand and accept the way you feel for him. I also hope he realizes that he is one lucky dude   Keep expressing yourself through poetry, you're great at it!
Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-12-14 05:00 PM


Excellent job on this one, it's very good !

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Erin
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3 posted 2000-12-14 06:34 PM


Tamma~
I love it!!!Its sweet...Keep up the good work!!!This ones going in my library!!!


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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4 posted 2000-12-14 09:29 PM


This was yet another sweet poem by you!
Hope to see more!



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IsGona
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5 posted 2000-12-14 09:43 PM


This is a wonderful poem and a wonderful vow.  You and Justin seem to make a great couple.     thanks for sharing
IsGona

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I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
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Tamma
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6 posted 2000-12-15 04:52 PM


Thanks Ya'll !! Yea, we've hit some rough spots, but we keep makin' it thru   Hes great...the best guy I've ever been with  

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~< !signature-->

I'm just a girl standing in front of a guy asking him to love me  www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-15-2000).]

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