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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
My disability gets weaker as I get older no one see's the pain they only see the happiness I wish I could show them I'm not as strong. People think I can do things but my hearts not strong my soul is the doctors may never find out what I have I think what I can do in life. I am a normal teenager but with challenges everyone has challenges but some of us have it more challenging than others. My advise to you is never feel pity never feel sorrow be there friend talk to them. They might not be able to talk to you but they'll find a way to talk to you find the good parts in them find the happy parts in them. ~*!Min!*~  If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Wow, very touching poem. It is great when you can realize your disabilities and chalanges and over come them in your own mind. You are a very strong willed person, great work. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I so admire your positive attitude in light of any challenges faced Min ... you have a lovely way of writing your emotions down in such an inspirational and thoughtful way. Lovely poem, and a wonderful message! Best wishes, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Min- I love the positive attitude you have. What a great example for others who may be facing challenges, however large or small they may be. You've expressed it well. Take care, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think that that is great advice and everyone should hear and remember it. Nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on the positive attitude! keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Minna~ You have a really good attitude...I dont know how you do it either...You have a strong heart to let you do it...Keep it up...And keep up the good work!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Min~ Great advice in this one...you have such a great outlook on life. We could all learn something from you  Keep your head high and smile Kris ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I thought this was beautifull experessed...but I think we all have disablitlies...maybe thats not what u meant....but another question, would u mind if i printed this for a good friend of mine.. i think she could use this poem to help her through the rough times in the near futur? Regina |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I always try to read your poems when i see them cause to me they are very inspirational. I love your writing. Thanks for sharing them and please never stop...again, thanks I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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