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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
No not me, another one fallen to you hopelessly your slave, no not me, fools believe in love I believe in attraction no not me I won't fall for you You make girls shiver do u do it on purpose? No not me there is one by u right now claiming you wanting you But no. Not u either huh? No one will ever claim u and be happy No…you won't give...you'll just take No…you'll always be the one being chased No not me I won't chase I won't fall for you No I won't No not me You seem so strong as if you can makes worries go away Put your arms around her...won't you? Let me see if u can actually like someone no…not love, I don't believe in love can you…can u put your strong arms around her show me…do u have feelings? No not me Don't put your arms around me.. No not me Her She loves you…yes. I said it I don't believe in love…no But then what is it that she feels about you? She'll do anything for you. She already has sacrificed her pride and dignity Your friends look down on her feel sorry for her I do But no not me I won't do that No not me I don't love yes…you look nice today yes can see the girls staring, envying me as I walk down the street with you but no not me I won't Go to her Go to the one that will do anything for you No not me I won't I can't I'm too proud I can't I won't No not me Go to her. Put your arms around her show me you have feelings No not me Don't touch me I won't fall No not me This poem is about me and my best friend...He's the bestest friend anyone could have, but the way he treats his girls...well that's another matter. Many can't believe that I haven't fallen for him, but who in their right minds would? (No disrespect Shorty. Anywayz I hope u guys enjoy!  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions!!! Are you sure you haven't fallen for him or at least find him to be attractive in some sense or another? It's odd because it SEEMs as though you're trying to convince yourself you don't like him throughout the poem with the "no not me's".......anyway I really liked the style and formatting of this whole poem. It's nice to have you a part of the Passions community. I can already tell you'll fit in quite nicely.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a very good first post. We can have friends that do things we don't agree with, and it's really hard to deal with. You describe the feelings well. Thanks for posting! PS-Check your e-mail! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Welcome to passions! It can be rough seeing a friend do something you don't agree with...let alone falling for the person...I've actually been in a very similar situation. Anyways, exellent first post, hope to see much more of you! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
welcome to passions...this was a wonderful first post..its understandable about no one believing u havent fallen for your best friend...that happened to me too..it took me froever to convince everyone i wasnt...but they finally believed me so maybe after a little whilethey will believeu..welcome again..glad to have you here.. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
 Welcome to Passions! Great poem! I know a few guys who are the type that every girl falls for. I have only fallen for one of them. And I wish I hadn't because he treats a lot of girls as you have desbribed on your poem, I thought I was different but I guess I wasn't. Nicely done, keep writing! luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
Thanx everyone for the warm welcome... Well Dopey, the "not me" in the poem was not to convience myself but to others. I know that haven't fallen for him...we talking about the guy that used to beat on me when we were younger (at times still does), exicute my dolls, not mention embarassing me on countless occassions. Me and him have been through a lot together, too much infact to view him other then as my brother. I love him to bis, but only as a brother. Thanx everyone for the warm wlc I really appreaciate it. ps thanx for the mail Luv bug |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions I liked reading this, it was very well done. Great job on your first post and I hope to see more from you! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here... Well nobody can make a desicion for you but you could. So make up your mind. Think of what you could have or what could hurt you. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
Thanx everyone for the comments. |
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