Teen Poetry #3 |
Learn to Love |
~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Staring at your picture I think of how it use to be The two of us together No one will ever see. We have drifted apart That is what you said I think of it over and over While lying in my bed I know it won't come true But I wish you were back with me I want things to go back to normal But I guess you just can't see. You can't see how it hurts me You won't see us making a new start You don't want to go through the pain And have to again put out your heart Yes it is very hard That I will agree, But we need open our eyes And a new world we will see One that is full of chances And we will start to begin To realize that we are all strong And we'll learn to love again. *do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :) |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really good, and I hope you learn to love again... |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
you knwo i love this babe!! keep it up!!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like the last two stanzas and the poem is very good. Thanks for sharing it with us! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really liked this poem and i really hope that you two do get back together and try your love again. Great poem |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Hey everyone, thanks. Oh and reply to whether me and the guy get back together... HELL NO! LOL And for the record... he was the one that just walked away Thanks again everyone. Love you Justine... thanks for tha support. oh and Eli, thanks for givin me something to write about *do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :) |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is really good sad but good |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Val, not only do I love the blue shade of your hair, but I LOVE this poem and I love you too! *L* ROCK ON! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
its a lesson to acknowledge, to imprint in your brain and to ensue it, great poem. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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