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~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-12-13 06:49 PM

Staring at your picture
I think of how it use to be
The two of us together
No one will ever see.

We have drifted apart
That is what you said
I think of it over and over
While lying in my bed

I know it won't come true
But I wish you were back with me
I want things to go back to normal
But I guess you just can't see.

You can't see how it hurts me
You won't see us making a new start
You don't want to go through the pain
And have to again put out your heart

Yes it is very hard
That I will agree,
But we need open our eyes
And a new world we will see

One that is full of chances
And we will start to begin
To realize that we are all strong
And we'll learn to love again.

*do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :)

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-12-13 08:00 PM

Hey. This was really good, and I hope you learn to love again...

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2000-12-13 09:13 PM

you knwo i love this babe!! keep it up!!!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-12-14 03:52 PM

I really like the last two stanzas and the poem is very good. Thanks for sharing it with us!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2000-12-15 09:51 PM

I really liked this poem and i really hope that you two do get back together and try your love again. Great poem

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

5 posted 2000-12-15 10:17 PM

Hey everyone, thanks. Oh and reply to whether me and the guy get back together... HELL NO!
LOL And for the record... he was the one that just walked away

Thanks again everyone. Love you Justine... thanks for tha support. oh and Eli, thanks for givin me something to write about

*do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :)

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

6 posted 2000-12-15 11:35 PM

this is really good sad but good

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

7 posted 2000-12-16 12:50 PM

Val, not only do I love the blue shade of your hair, but I LOVE this poem and I love you too! *L*

ROCK ON!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

8 posted 2000-12-16 01:03 AM

its a lesson to acknowledge, to imprint in your brain and to ensue it, great poem.

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

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