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I´m walking away
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I´m walking away |
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Angel christmas New Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 6 |
I´m walking away from the tears in my heart I´m walking away from the broken love I´m walking away without even looking back I´m walking away cause the world looks so sad I´m walking away my star is falling down I´m walking away cause I can´t feel the ground I`m walking away as the mirros chruses behind I´m walking away I don´t read see the signs I`m walking away as the truth becomes a lie I´m walking away from the pain within´ my mind I`m walking away cause time is going to fast I´m walking away wanna close the book to my past I`m walking away cause I`m feeling afraid I`m walking away it made me lose my faith I`m walking away cause the sun won´t rise I´m walking away can´t look into my eyes .......................Brian........................ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The repetition in this one really adds the impact. i liked it a lot. Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how you wrote this one Brian, nice job. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Whoa!!! What a message !!! Hope you have the strength to walk away  ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ < !signature--> "I'm just a girl, standing in front of a guy asking him to love me" www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-14-2000).] |
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