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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-12 02:53 PM



~*~ To My Justin ~*~

You were a great friend,
Then became more.
I’ve cried on your shoulder,
And let you into my heart.
I’ve told you my secrets,
And how much I care for you.
You’re still a great friend,
And so much more.
You are my last thought at night,
And my first thought in the morning.
You were there for me,
When I needed you.
I liked you before then,
But at that moment I fell in love.
You have my heart,
And no one can take it from you.
Justin, I love you,
And that isn’t going to change.

~*~ 001212 ~*~


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1 posted 2000-12-12 04:08 PM


Hmmmmmmm?

Tamma
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2 posted 2000-12-12 04:16 PM


Hallie_Angel:

You haven't been here nearly long enough to know everything thats gone on with Justin and I. Let's just say this: I had some pretty messed up relationships before he walked into my life.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~

(It'll be 3 months Thursday!!)

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3 posted 2000-12-12 04:24 PM


hey congratulations!3 months wow!beautiful poem
Regina

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4 posted 2000-12-12 06:33 PM


Sweet poem! I know you were having communication issues w/ Justin... I'm assuming it's all good now??? Good for you on it being 3 months!
xoxo
Jenn


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5 posted 2000-12-12 06:44 PM


Hey:
    Nice poem, I like a Justin too! =) So yeah, I'm pretty sure I know what its like. I wrote a poem for him, it's called, I Love You. What a coincedence, we wrote almost the same lines in our poems...Anyways, gotta go now, keep writin.
Your friend,
Angel

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6 posted 2000-12-13 01:48 PM


Glad to see things are cool between you and him. Good expression within the poems. I like your poems because they always give us an update on what's going on in your relationship. Hope to see more happy, lovy ones!



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7 posted 2000-12-14 03:16 PM


You share a lot with your poems, nice job on this one, I think it's really good

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8 posted 2000-12-14 03:44 PM


Awwww Tamma this is soo sweet!!!I think that he would like it...Its good that you have a good guy for yourself now...Good work one the poem!!!Keep it up!!!

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9 posted 2000-12-14 03:56 PM


3 Months today!!!

I'm so happy things are doing better

     ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~    
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10 posted 2000-12-14 04:07 PM


Great job Tamma.
You always express your feelings tward Justin so well.
Always a pleasure to read.
IsGona

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11 posted 2000-12-14 04:11 PM


this is great. it's also the first poem I've read from you about your Justin.  I have an ex boyfriend named Justin whom I still love a lot, and I want to get back together with. Good luck with your guy!


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