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The night is long
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The night is long |
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Angel christmas New Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 6 |
No matter where I look I see your face I will not hide I wont´t erase cause every moment spend with you is a dream come true I´ll love you from the bottom of my heart till death do us part with everysingle tear in my eyes I need you by my side The night is long when you´re not here my soul´s getting cold when you´re not near and I can´t stand the pain the night is long when you´renot close my heart getting wike cause you´remy rose and you´re so far away ......................Brian......................... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good poem and i hope things do get better. This feeling sucks and it's quite painful. Hope to see some happy poems soon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
These feelings can be very painful but i know you'll get through them. I sometimes feel this way about someone...but the feelings eventually let up. Good poem  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Brian, you wrote of this very well, I think you did a great job on this poem < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-14-2000).] |
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