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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-12-12 07:27 PM


My tea's gone cold I'm wonderin' why I
got outta bed at all
the morning rain clouds up my window
and I can't see at all
and even if I could it would all be gray
put your picture on my wall
it reminds me that it's not so bad
it's not so bad.




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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2000-12-12 08:56 PM


Uh-oh....! I love that song too. So does Dido, and Eminem. I'm sorry, but they get upset about this sort of stuff.  
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

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2 posted 2000-12-13 01:58 PM


Good part of the song.....rock on



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2000-12-13 05:50 PM


Dopey.... actually, it is an entire song, from Dido. It is a part of Eminem's Stan...
But Dido should get props.   "It's not do bad...."
xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Allysa
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4 posted 2000-12-14 08:37 AM


I don't remember writing this. I honestly don't. Maybe I'll continue this. or something, through my point of view.

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


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5 posted 2000-12-14 04:30 PM


Well you'd better do something so they don't take it off   and you really don't remember posting this?

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6 posted 2000-12-28 06:06 PM


I'm totally lost here?  Is this suppose to be a song or something?  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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7 posted 2000-12-28 07:32 PM


It's a song by Dido from the No Angel album. Eminem used it in his Stan song. Just to clear things up for anyone confused. It's a great song...Dido is an excellent musician.

Live and let live.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~


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