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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
I ask myself everyday is this love of ours true? Is it going to last for a long time to come? Or just a short while that will soon fade away. Not one day goes by when my mind don't think of you. I know I love you and you love me. And I do believe we will stay together. While my life changes all because of you. Darkness and agony leave my head. When your love and joy floods my heart. Because of what you have done I thank you. I don't really know anything I can do. But I do know what to say. I love you! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I loved that poem. It was very sweet and I hope that its for someone special. I hope to read more from you and don't let a talent like this disappear. Chel |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Nicely written!! I love the way you personalized it so well~I haven't seen much work from you but I do hope to see some more because you are a truly talented writer!! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes yes very well done i love this piece and hope to read more of you soon and keep this kind of stuff up because you are the Zombie you are LOL I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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