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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Since I am new to this whole thing, this piece might help all of you out there to get a better understanding of the type of person that I am. I am all that I can be. nothing more and nothing less. I live my life and walk with my head held high. I've allways tried to give more than I've taken. Though I am not ashamed of a helping hand. That is just my way. I work hard, and I take it easy. I like coffee with LOTS of sugar. I am true to myself and I am there for my friends. I love music, I love to sing. I am very easily amused. I love to smile, and laugh outloud. I am happy with me. And if I'm not good enough for you, Well, that will be ok with me. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is great, my friend. As long as you are comfortable with who you are, it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hi. This is a really cute poem, I like it. I'll look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep writing and of course have fun! Luv ya, Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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~Night_Mist~ Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 31Calgary, AB Canada |
Hello: Welcome to Passions. I too am a new writer to this site. Perhaps, I've been here for a week. I immediately fell in love with the site so hope you have fun too! Anyways, we are very alike. I like your poem and hope to read more from you. If you ever wanna talk my e-mail is [email protected]. Luv, ~Night_Mist~ |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I really like this poem because in it you admit that you have shortcomings but you have no desire to be perfect. I think that's a lesson all people should learn. I like coffee with just a little sugar but LOTS of cream Thanks for letting us glimpse into who you are, in fact I wish more people would post a poem like this so we could get to know them better.Love, Crystal P.S. Feel free to E-mail me sometime at [email protected]!! Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well i really like this poem...i never thought that someone would write a poem about themselves and how they look at themselves...but if everyone did it we would look at them from a different point...cause alot of the poems are about getting a brokenheart or finding that special someone that you care about...but yours is different...you did it about yourself and i really like it... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes welcome and its true you must be happy with who you are and nothing else matters. enjoyed the read thanks for helping us learn a little about you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey man...well, I talked to ya tonight, so I know you're enjoying the forum. Sorry I didn't ge a chance to post againg tonigth...maybe tomorrow nigth. I gotta watch that movie and get to bed...later man. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions :  I really like this. It was original, and really a piece of you. I can't wait to read more. ~Susie  "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jason~Looks like I missed this one earlier!  Sorry about that! Anyways, I love your work! And well it sounds like we have a lot in common. I'm glad that you are enjoying the forum! It's a neat place. I guess, I'll be looking for more of your work. Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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