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J1GGZ New Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 2 |
~ MY L0V3 ~ The moment I saw you, I pictured you as my dove, Flying throughout my thoughts, Sharing your love. You say that my poems, Bring tears to your eyes, Nights of endless phone conversations, Comforting you while you cry. I give my endless devotion, Hoping to see motion, Hoping to share emotion, You were ~ my love ~ You were ~ my love ~ 2 J1GGZ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
very well done. i certainly hope that this poem brought a smile on the person's face and not tears. you've let them know that they're special. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is very well said i see that you care a great deal about this person and i hope that you to become as one real soon and i long to find the love that you have. great piece. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
This is an excellent poem! I'm glad to see that you have a special someone in your life! Keep up the wonderful writing and best of luck in life and love!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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