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J1GGZ
New Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 2


0 posted 2000-06-30 03:38 PM


  ~ MY L0V3 ~

  The moment I saw you,
  I pictured you as my dove,
  Flying throughout my thoughts,
  Sharing your love.
  You say that my poems,
  Bring tears to your eyes,
  Nights of endless phone conversations,
  Comforting you while you cry.
  I give my endless devotion,
  Hoping to see motion,
  Hoping to share emotion,
  You were ~ my love ~
  You were ~ my love ~ 2

  J1GGZ
  
  
  

© Copyright 2000 J1GGZ - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2000-07-01 02:04 AM


very well done. i certainly hope that this poem brought a smile on the person's face and not tears. you've let them know that they're special.

We all got our demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-07-01 02:07 AM


this is very well said i see that you care a great deal about this person and i hope that you to become as one real soon and i long to find the love that you have. great piece. keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-07-02 12:05 PM


This is an excellent poem! I'm glad to see that you have a special someone in your life! Keep up the wonderful writing and best of luck in life and love!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-22 05:28 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-22 05:30 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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