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Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

0 posted 2000-12-11 05:04 PM

Father Time has held her tight
While Mother Nature guides the way.
In all her pain and fearful plight,
She's found a home from which she's strayed.

A hardened heart did scar her wrists
And empty eyes held truth untold;
Been rescued from psychiatrists
And under beds, alone and cold.

Through all the days behind a screen,
And wishing upon what has been,
She sought a light and one was seen;
It's time for her to laugh again.

kimmy
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 98

1 posted 2000-12-11 05:13 PM

wow..this was a wonderful poem...i glad that it sounds like things are looking up..stay cheerful...

Minister of Dissonance
Junior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 20

2 posted 2000-12-11 06:10 PM

where is the light, perhaps i may see it also

*slash & burn*
the great dissonant one

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2000-12-12 10:33 AM

Well, truth is, I'm not quite sure where the light is. I wrote this as an attempt to get outta my sadness...it only helped a lil. I guess I gotta be my own light. Thanks for reading.

~Carly

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

4 posted 2000-12-12 10:37 AM

Bravo... Very optimistic. I think that's great

IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-12-12 11:27 AM

I like how you wrote this and I hope things do get better soon. Good job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

6 posted 2000-12-12 09:52 PM

I was quite impressed with this! Kudos, well written, good flow, and an optimistic message. Bravo!

Vreni

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2000-12-13 02:20 PM

Well if Vreni liked it, then it MUST be damn good!! hehe......good job on this one carly........kudos to you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

8 posted 2000-12-13 07:51 PM

Hello people! Thank you so much for reading and replying. It means a lot to me to see that you read this. Thanks a lot.

~Carly

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