Teen Poetry #3 |
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I'll be 18 in 3 days |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
I’ll be 18 in 3 days And all I want Is for everyone To forget about me Just like every Valentine’s day I’ve endured. Its just another Day of the year. Just that its 12-13 doesn’t Mean a thing. Just another day To live thru. I wanna scream, I wanna shout I’ll be 18… But all I want Is to spend it With Justin. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner ~*~ Tamma ~*~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think that since it's your b-day you do whatever you want. But anyway good poem expression wise. You had to say something and you said it bluntly. Hope to see more! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the way this is written, it's very strong. nice job of writing! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Yea...And my parents decided they were gonna throw a party, and I *just* found out about it this morning when I got home... www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner ~*~ Tamma ~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY TAMMA!!!!!!!You told us in a really creative way... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
HAPPY 18th BRITHDAY TAMMA!!! hmmmm...u look more like 12 in your pic --- no offense intended ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
none taken acire, i hear that alot ![]() www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner ~*~ Tamma ~*~ |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I hope your birthday is something special for you...its your day to shine hun...you should do what ever you want and have fun and just forget about the rest of the world for a day...hope you enjoy it!! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
18 huh!! Well my 18th was boring! I don't know what the whole jizzy jazz about being 18 is!! It is another day in your life - the only thing is now you are really responsible for yourself and where's the fun there? none! oh - and you get to vote for politicians who generally have no idea anyway!! As for drinking well generally we have all done it before 18 anyway so what's the big deal? It's no fun when it's legal!! Have a great day! Melz!! |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
![]() ![]() I hope you have a great day with Justin and your friends! Good luck and I hope you best of lucks with everything in your life. ![]() Your friend Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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