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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-12-09 03:05 PM

Change of Heart:

The glass is half empty
You positive fools.
Wither and die.
Become the ghouls.

Down with water,
And your smirk of love.
Frowning is life
Is what I speak of.

Weary and still
Your laughter annoys.
It's all I can do.
Kill your voice.

Now I'm happy
With your ways done through.
Come to think of it,
I simply miss you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

1 posted 2000-12-09 03:37 PM

WOW. That's all I can say... that has to be the most perfect poem ever! seriously! Everyone has their days like that... and this poem describes them perfectly.

Loved it!
Sarah

(ps. yay! i'm the first one!! haha)

with the unknown comes no expectations
in this i find my peace

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-12-09 05:54 PM

You never cease to amaze me. I've said that before, I know, but its so dang true...enjoy the sunshine.

~Carly< !signature-->

Pardon me while I burst into flames...
I've had enough of the world and it's people's mindless games...

[This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 12-09-2000).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2000-12-09 07:54 PM

This one was AWESOME!!!! Great job yet again dopey!!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-12-11 01:17 PM

I like the ending of this a lot, nice job on it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

5 posted 2000-12-11 10:13 PM

Quite impressive Dopey, as always

Bel

kimmy
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 98

6 posted 2000-12-11 10:34 PM

i really enjoyed this one..good job on it..keep em coming..

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2000-12-12 02:18 AM

Good one Dopey!!! OF course they are always good though...

P.S.~Go check out my new post I think you might like it!!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

8 posted 2000-12-12 04:27 PM

its good,very good....."clap""claP"
lol....i enjoyed it....keep em coming
regina

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

9 posted 2000-12-12 06:06 PM

I know, you told me not to look, but that just caused me to become all the more curious....I can empathize with the sentiments expressed...it was very well written, the usual wonderful Dopeyesque poetry we've all come to love and appreciate. Kudos, kiddo, twas much enjoyed. Much love.

Vreni

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

10 posted 2000-12-12 11:00 PM

I thaught I had already replied to this but I guess not... I think peanogrl83 said it best: it was "the usual wonderful Dopeyesque poetry we've all come to love and appreciate"
Good job. Keep it up
IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~