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Teen Poetry #3

Couldn´t get enough of you

Angel christmas
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since 2000-12-06

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0 posted 2000-12-11 02:53 AM

I saw you on the television
couldn´t take my eyes of you
didnt know if you where an illusion
didn´t want to close my eyes
I was afraid you would go away
cause I´ve been waiting all of my life
for the girl of my dreams

Couldn´t get enough of your smile
the way you walk
the glimbt in you eyes
and sweet way you talk
couldn´t get enough of you

brian

Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-12-11 02:06 PM

Great job of capturing this in words, I'm left wondering who you saw

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2000-12-11 04:13 PM

Yea im wondering who you saw too...but thats ok, the mystery of it makes it more interesting. Very good poem

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

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Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2000-12-11 05:01 PM

This was great!! I really liked it. And my curiosity is drivin me nuts....

~Carly

Hallie_Angel
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since 2000-12-06

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4 posted 2000-12-11 05:06 PM

Aww, was it me you saw??? J/K

who was it? Good poem!!!

Dopey Dope

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5 posted 2000-12-12 09:53 PM

Thanks for posting this. A very sweet poem you've written here!

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LoveBug

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6 posted 2000-12-12 09:56 PM

This is a beautiful love poem. It's very possible to fall in love with the vision of someone without even meeting them. (I'm assuming that's what it's about: "I saw you on the television")

You describe the feelings well. Thanks for posting!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

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