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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
A fallen angel, Sacrificed to humanity, Realization of wrong, Lost belief of unknown, Tragically pronounced, Misunderstood creativity, Demoted from hierarchy, Emotionless to the fate, Soul searching on earth, Failing to acknowledge, One further destination, Succombs to aimless wandering, Unveiling harmful secrets, Tried and proven untrue, Mirror images mean nothing, Provoking thoughts destroy, Truthful voices are muted, Deafening sounds scream, Tasteless areas of mind, Handful of misconceptions, Controlling preached words, Comfortless to mourning, Torn between feelings, Undeveloped education, Lost amongst the usual, Survival of the fittest, Relentless to the unforseen, The fallen one refuses to believe, In some thing invisible. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Powerful writing Kimmy, and wonderful expression ... nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one did have power in it, excellent job!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Like they said, this was really powerful. I loved your word choices. Great job! ~Carly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. a wonderful read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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