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John Lennon (Please read your responses would mean so much to me)
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John Lennon (Please read your responses would mean so much to me) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Hopefully this is a worthy tribute to someone that I truly look up to though he passed away 12 days before I was borne... It was twenty years ago today That John Lennon's soul was sent on its way On a cold, December night Through the realms of heaven and hell And when the trigger was pulled It pierced the angel's ears like an uncontrollable bell So tell me now how does he get through the night? Does he still see the finger holding the trigger tight I wonder each and every night Yet I'm sure he holds each and everyone that he loves tight and whispers that he's alright As he shines upon them and everyone else in the world with his radiating love For his body might be forever gone But he will never be done singing his song For his soul will always shine on like the moon, the stars and the sun... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was such a great tribute to a wonderful man. It was written very well, and I'm glad I got a chance to read it. ~Carly |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, this was great. I was raised as a Beatles fan, so I can at least understand what you're talking about here. When did he die again? Anyway, great poem, I'm sure he'd like it, keep it up Bel |
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Minister of Dissonance Junior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 20 |
idealistic vision, but appropriate *mourn* the great dissonant one |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely tribute Ceinwyn ... indeed, it was a sad day when the music stopped. He was a wonderful and creative artist ... very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nicely written, he died Dec. 8, 1980 Bel. Great wok "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
John Lennon was a wonderful artist. I am a big fan, and I think that you do him great justice with this beautiful tribute. Thank you for sharing this with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
IMAGINE that......  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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