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A Goal Of Mine
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A Goal Of Mine |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
My world is breaking down, Right before my eyes. I fall to me knees, All i can do is cry. I loose my balance, Too many times. To stand on my feet, Is a new goal of mine. Its hard to stay stable, When theres so much to knock you down. It's a hard task, To keep my feet firm on the ground. Their are people everywhere, Reaching out there hands. Trying to help me, Trying to understand. I dont want your help, I can do it on my own. If i really wanted it. All i had to do was pick up a phone. So leave me be, I'm not a child anymore. Take a step back, And see whats in store. I dont even know, What the future will bring. The fate of mine, Holds so many things. So i'll one day, Stand on my own two feet. And that goal of mine, I'll finally defeat. |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
good poem again..reach your own goals. my dad always said "dreams come true, but you can only ruin them" but your case its a goal bye minna  |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Independent... "look what I did.. on my own" it feels great to be able to say those words. I think your poem does a great job showing this desire to be independent. Nice wprk IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good work on this! Independence is vital, we all need to be self-sufficient to an extent. I hope things work out for you. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea i feel that independence is vital too that is why im trying to get it...thanks guys for replying! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Sounds like you're ready to go for it all Great job expressing your goal here! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Go for it! Goals should be achieved......so do it hehe!! I wish you the best of luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I see you wanna learn thru your mistakes. That's good cause you really learn. Dont' get mad at others for trying to help though. Just put it this way, just think it's beacuse they care. Thanks for the share. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Learning on your own is good. But having someone to show you is better cuz you always have someone there for you. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This is a really really good poem...thanks for sharing it with us! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey chic!! This was awesome...im feelin it. goes in my library **Kiley ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Well done! It is always annoying when othere people try to run your life for you! Congratulations and good luck!! Melz!! |
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