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They dont know (and i dont care) |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
He is not understood by everyone, but i do understand him, i can look deep and see a soul that contradicts his actions i can hold his hand and feel the warmth in his blood comes from his heart so when they question my love for him there is nothing i can do nothing i can say my heart has this powerful feeling that words can not convey I used to wish that he would show others that he changed, now all i want is for him to know that i love him this way |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great poem. It's to bad your love is misunderstood but just as you it is not important, your love is. Keep up the good work IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was really good...I liked it alot, I know love is tough. But great poem, keep writing! Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"my heart has this powerful feeling that words can not convey" I liked that part of this a lot and the title caught my attention well. Nice job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I understand what your saying and im sorta in the same situation as you...but i dont think anyone will ever believe he changed if he ever does...but i cant help it...i still love him n e way...great poem |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Lemme guess Ally that ones for *~~~Eminem~~~* It's a good one, too bad he don't know!!!  |
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dreamer1 12 5 24 Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 150crossing between |
wow. hope you keep writing here and that your boyfriend is more understood by people. I think a few of the lines could be separated into more than one line, it's hard to read as poetry. But it was really well written! keep it up! ....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice anything for the sake of it.... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was sweet and I surely hope that things work out just fine between the two of you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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