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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Hmmm... Exactly What You Need I've tried so hard to be what you want so sick and tired of not getting too far I know how she hurt you I'm sorry I can't fix or take that back and I'm sorry that I don't seem to be exactly what you need maybe if you'd try tell me what that 'what' is I could be something more to you, for you exactly what you need. < !signature--> love is friendship set on fire... now, if only it were free to burn... [This message has been edited by silvrduck (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
hey that was good! I really liked it! Great job, keep writing!! Luv, ~*~Sweetstuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, If this is going on right now, I hope things improve and you can be what he needs. Nice job of expressing this, the poem is very good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good way to let your feelings known. Now all you have to do is give this to that person and let them know what you are thinking. Keep it up!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sometimes i wish i could change and be what someone exactly wants me to be...but unfortunately i dont always carry the certain qualities that are needed...dont worry if you 2 are meant to be you will be someday....good poem |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yes, yes. If you two were meant to be, then who you ARE, is what he'll NEED. No real changing will be required. I'm sure if it is something small... like waiting till his heart heals from pain, then you two will be just fine. Try and be patient. Nice poem! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
When you love someone, all you want to be is what the person wants. This can be dangerous. If this person really loves you, they will love you for exactly what you are, so never change for anyone! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this was a great way to vent, but like the rest I wouldn't suggest changing to fit somebody's needs..........IMPROVING..sure...but not changing.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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