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IsGona
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0 posted 2000-12-09 10:56 PM



Note: A cinquain

noun
adjective, adjective
verb, verb, verb
four word phrase about noun
noun
¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤

Love
Mysterious, allusive
Chasing, forgotting, losing
Leaving me here alone    
Love
    


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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-12-10 01:58 AM


Thank you so much for explaning what a cinquain was because i had no idea. It rocked though, you oughta do more of these weirded out poems. New stylez for me to learn.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Child of the Stars
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2 posted 2000-12-10 08:09 PM



  Yip yip, this kicked some booty. I remember these thingies, I never got the hang of em though...well great job once again bud!   I'm smilin.

  ~Carly

Minister of Dissonance
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3 posted 2000-12-10 11:06 PM


quaint, well-formed, bravo

*where do we go from here*
the great dissonant one

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-12-11 01:31 PM


Yeah, thanks for showing me what this style is, you did a great job on the poem! I might have to try some of these

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-12-11 01:40 PM


thanks for shaowing me what that meant
at first i thought that was the poem   and i told myself "boy this girl's gone crazy"  
but when i saw the bottom part, i was amazed at what i had to read.  BRAVO

by the way IsGona, you're gona what?  
just curious  


I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


IsGona
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6 posted 2000-12-11 02:14 PM


Thank you every one

acire ~ Thanks... but... You should have been thinkin' "this guy's gone crazy"... but how were you supposed to know right?
and My name... That's a very long story.

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

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