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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I wonder what happen to our love I guess it went down with the rain I wish it'd come back My heart is empty you no longer care for me I still care for you All the memories have passed there not comming back either they'll stay in our hearts What was I when I was yours a friend who played with or a girlfriend who you loved? I see you and want to cry I ignore you and don't talk I think of you differently You want me back in your life more than a friend back as a girlfriend Do I trust you? I'll get hurt again I'd like to be friends When I tell you I want to be your friend you frown and act nice Love is hitting me again you can't face it that someone else likes me you want me but I don't want you Maybe when this life comes to a end we will be lovers again we will be happy again I'm always your friend I may not talk to you but I still care I think could this be lost love or not.. ~Min~ A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"I wonder what happen to our love I guess it went down with the rain I wish it'd come back" I think you did a great job of telling your emotions here, the poem is very good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem expressed your emotions well. I hope that luck flies your way!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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QTpieOmy Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 11Illinois |
This was a great poem, sorry it took me so long to reply... You told me to read your version of "Lost Love" after you read mine. Im glad you posted it! Keep writing, you've got talent! Love Always, Tara |
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