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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I see lies in your eyes you try hiding them from me but it's not working when you say I love you Minna I don't believe you you wan't to hug me but I'm not falling in love I will someday but never with you you say "Minna can we be friends" do I trust you? no you'll lie why are you doing this to me? I know we aren't going out I know your mad at me but you shouldn't lie A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well whoever this person is, he shouldn't be lying. Good luck with you and this situation. I see you posting up a lot of poems pertaining to this topic. hope to see more happy poems though....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
this is a nice poem. I like it. You might want to make sure he's lying before accusing him, I get accused of lying about important things all the time, and nothing makes me madder |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on this and I hope he stops his lies soon. And Dopey's right, you should post some happy poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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