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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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0 posted 2000-12-10 11:31 AM


I see lies in your eyes
you try hiding them from me
but it's not working
when you say I love you Minna
I don't believe you
you wan't to hug me but I'm not falling in love
I will someday but never with you
you say "Minna can we be friends"
do I trust you? no you'll lie
why are you doing this to me?
I know we aren't going out
I know your mad at me
but you shouldn't lie



A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time



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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-12-10 02:02 PM


Well whoever this person is, he shouldn't be lying. Good luck with you and this situation. I see you posting up a lot of poems pertaining to this topic.
hope to see more happy poems though....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
2 posted 2000-12-10 03:53 PM


this is a nice poem.
I like it. You might want to make sure he's lying before accusing him,
I get accused of lying about important things all the time, and nothing makes me madder

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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3 posted 2000-12-11 01:10 PM


Good job on this and I hope he stops his lies soon.  And Dopey's right, you should post some happy poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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