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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
You are my first thought, Every morning, And my last of every night. You are the safety in my darkness, And the brightness in my light. Your face is total perfection, Your personality is just right. You're sweet and caring, You're my one and only delight, I love you... And I only hope you love me too! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
WOW, this was really sweet... but I'm sorry... I just don't feel the same way about you. I mean I don't even know ya. lol jk  Seriously though,this was great. Every word seemed to fit perfectly.IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
*sigh*... this was really, really good! and it brought a smile to my face.  thanks for sharing it!!take care, Sarah love is friendship set on fire... now, if only it were free to ignite... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Fearless_Angel ... I hope you get the answer you are looking for! Best wishes, /Kit |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this poem was so sweet!!! I liked it a lot |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sorry!! I posted twice... [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i thought this poem was really cute and sweet and i hope everything works out for you.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
IsGona.....tisk tisk.....such a trouble maker. Anyway i thought the poem was sweet. Great job on this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on this, it's such a nice poem  !"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey everyone: Yeah, it's been a while. I've been so wrapped up in everything else, I haven't had time to do what I love most. Anyways, thank you to everyone who left me a note. I really aprreciate it and if anyone wants to check out the poem I wrote that is being published, it's posted at www.poetry.com! Anyways, gotta bounce now, buh bye! Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo *muah* "Take care and remember a certain lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Wooow, I loved this poem, it's so sweet! Yeah, I think we all feel the same way when we're in love. Good luck with him, and take the risk, it's the best thing you can do! Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, great poem! I know what that's like. Did you show this to the person? Keep it up Bel |
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Minister of Dissonance Junior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 20 |
love is fleeting, pain endures *ache* the great dissonant one |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Everyone: Yeah, thanks for all the encouragement! I truly am in love with this guy expect that I don't know how to get it across to him, yet! Today, I found out that he knows that I actually exist because he told my friend that he thought I looked like a nice person to hang around with. Should I give him this poem? I'm not quite sure what moves to move, please give me advice...=) Thanks everyone, I aprreciate all of your help! Well, get back to me ASAP, at ICQ#64399384, or e-mail me at Fearless_Angel@hotmail.com. Buh bye! Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is very sweet. This guy is very lucky. Nice writing! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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