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Al Nany Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 16 |
Truth I've once believed that the truth is never to be found, I was once convinced that love is as real as the morning dew. If words can paint the picture I wished to describe, then it would be the most beautiful picture of all. I've ran on the road of happiness, I've walked through the path of sorrow. I've given the innocence of the heart that will never return, I've taken the scar of regrets which I'll always remember. If love has no faults, then we shall all be falwless beings. If love is perfect, then perfect means momentary. If love can't be destroyed, then nothing can be destroyed. If love is the truth, then honesty will no longer be a myth. We often search for things that are before our eyes, letting hope blind the truth, we find nothing. Perhaps when we decide give patience, we will then be free from desperation. June 29, 1999 |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! Wow, such a deep poem! I am thoroughly impressed. I looked at the title and analyzed the poem and found that the title is so simple compared to the poem, but if you like it like that then it's cool. I loved the poem is what i'm saying!! WOnderful to have you aboard Passions! Hope to see more of you around here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I'm impressed as well, this is expressed very well and I love it. I really like this stanza, and the whole thing is excellent! Keep posting, and I hope you enjoy it here at Passions! "If love has no faults, then we shall all be falwless beings. If love is perfect, then perfect means momentary. If love can't be destroyed, then nothing can be destroyed. If love is the truth, then honesty will no longer be a myth." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is an excellent first post! This is a very deep and thought-provoking poem. I was knocked over by this part "We often search for things that are before our eyes, letting hope blind the truth, we find nothing." Wonderful work, my friend. I hope to see more soon! PS-check your e-mail "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hey! Welcome to Passions! Great poem.. I hope to see more posts! Keep up the good work  *Jennifer |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Welcome to Passions! *Excellent* first post! I loved it, it seems so real and... raw. Keep up the great work, i look forward to reading more from you! take care, Sarah with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there, and welcome!! This was magnificent...I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting, and thank you for joining us!! ~Carly |
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