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lost_and_lonely_angel
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0 posted 2000-12-08 10:55 PM


I'm lost without you in my life
you aren't here anymore, gone for
good
You hurt me so bad, but I hurt you
more
Wishes and words never fufilled,
other girls I found, when you
said you loved me
It's too bad, I thought we were
meant for eachother.
I'm a lost and lonely angel
waiting for you to come back,
wishing I could take my heart
back from you, but I only know
I'll give it back again
I hate the way you make me cry,
I hate the way I still want you
I hate the most is that you are
never going to hold me in your
arms and tell me it will be
alright...
Lost and Lonely Angel

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-12-08 11:28 PM


Welcome to Passions! Hopefully, now that you're here you won't be lost and lonely anymore. I know the feeling of your poem quite well...probably all of us do. You are not alone in your pain. Once again, welcome!
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2 posted 2000-12-08 11:41 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

This was a great first post...it was an excellent way to enter into passions! I liked it a lot and i cant wait to see more!!  

kimmy
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3 posted 2000-12-09 03:29 AM


welcome to passions...i enjoyed your poem very much..god work on writing this one and i hope to read more...i know exactly how you rae feeling right now..but don't worry aobut it it will get better...and again...welcome to passions...
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4 posted 2000-12-09 08:17 AM


Welcome to Passions!

This is a very well-written first post. Whenever we lose someone we love, it's a horrible feeling. I only hope that you find someone who doesn't make you feel lost and lonely. And, as Elizabeth said, we can all relate. Thanks for posting.

PS-Check your e-mail

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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5 posted 2000-12-09 09:26 AM


Hey!  Welcome to Passions!  That first post was really good... keep em coming.  And always remember you can confide in anyone here in Passions.. just give the same in return.  I hope your stay is long and enjoyable!

*Jennifer

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6 posted 2000-12-09 12:39 PM


  
  Welcome!! This was a great poem, but such a horrible subject...it doesn't seem right that good people are forced to feel so lonely...well keep writing and hope ya make lasting friendships here in this wonderful world...

  ~Carly

Ina
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7 posted 2000-12-09 02:04 PM


hahaha!!!i cant believe u actually posted it up, babe!its amazing....forget about that guy, he was horible!!amazing!welcome to passions btw....
luv ya your BFF
Regina
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Lakewalker
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8 posted 2000-12-09 02:07 PM


Welcome to Passions
I think this poem is a good entrance into the teen forum, nice job on it   I hope you post more and enjoy it here!

"You hurt me so bad, but I hurt you
more"


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9 posted 2000-12-09 02:41 PM


This was great. Welcome to Passions. Hope to see more of you around.



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