Teen Poetry #3 |
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lost and lonely |
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lost_and_lonely_angel New Member
since 2000-12-08
Posts 1canada |
I'm lost without you in my life you aren't here anymore, gone for good You hurt me so bad, but I hurt you more Wishes and words never fufilled, other girls I found, when you said you loved me It's too bad, I thought we were meant for eachother. I'm a lost and lonely angel waiting for you to come back, wishing I could take my heart back from you, but I only know I'll give it back again I hate the way you make me cry, I hate the way I still want you I hate the most is that you are never going to hold me in your arms and tell me it will be alright... Lost and Lonely Angel |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome to Passions! Hopefully, now that you're here you won't be lost and lonely anymore. I know the feeling of your poem quite well...probably all of us do. You are not alone in your pain. Once again, welcome! |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! This was a great first post...it was an excellent way to enter into passions! I liked it a lot and i cant wait to see more!! ![]() |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
welcome to passions...i enjoyed your poem very much..god work on writing this one and i hope to read more...i know exactly how you rae feeling right now..but don't worry aobut it it will get better...and again...welcome to passions... |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a very well-written first post. Whenever we lose someone we love, it's a horrible feeling. I only hope that you find someone who doesn't make you feel lost and lonely. And, as Elizabeth said, we can all relate. Thanks for posting. PS-Check your e-mail "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hey! Welcome to Passions! That first post was really good... keep em coming. And always remember you can confide in anyone here in Passions.. just give the same in return. I hope your stay is long and enjoyable! *Jennifer |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Welcome!! This was a great poem, but such a horrible subject...it doesn't seem right that good people are forced to feel so lonely...well keep writing and hope ya make lasting friendships here in this wonderful world... ~Carly |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
hahaha!!!i cant believe u actually posted it up, babe!its amazing....forget about that guy, he was horible!!amazing!welcome to passions btw.... luv ya your BFF Regina PShahahahahahahaha....:P |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
![]() ![]() I think this poem is a good entrance into the teen forum, nice job on it ![]() "You hurt me so bad, but I hurt you more" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Welcome to Passions. Hope to see more of you around. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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