Teen Poetry #3 |
a river somewhere |
katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
As the river flows from the mountains, the birds sing their morning song. The trees sway ever so slightly in the breeze. Alass this carm will never last. For where there is carm the pain will always follow. The the rain starts. No longer do the birds sing. No longer do the trees sway in the breeze. No longer does the river flow. No now everything has changed. Now the river rushers, the birds hark and the trees violently swing. so we say good bye to the carm and hello to the hectic. That is only for now, for things are forever changing. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
These are some great thoughts, Katherine. Just remember, if there was no rain, there would be no river, trees, or birds. As you say, things are forever changing, and just as calm can give way to storm, a storm can subside just as quickly. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
WHOA great way of expressing things i like it!!!!!!!!! ~BrandenBear~ "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, the words in this fit so well together.. I loved it!!!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the thoughts in this one were staggering. very well thought out. Good job! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on this, I like it, keep posting "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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