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Walking on Clouds |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
Walking on Clouds When you lie awake at night And you're facing somewhat of a plight, You can go to a land Where nothing of that sort is known to man. It's as if your walking on clouds. It's a place where things happen. Things in reality that could never happen. Things that wouldn't occur in your wildest dreams. And it seems That you're walking on clouds. Anything could happen there. As long as you dare To dream of the place Where you walk on clouds. <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this poem. It has a magical tone to it. It's so beautiful.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was terrific. Like he said, magical. I really anjoyed reading it. ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, You did a good job of describing this, I really like the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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