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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
You make me do what I don't wanna do You make me feel what I don't wanna feel You make me sad when I don't wanna be sad You make me say the things I don't wanna say You make me cry when I already am. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
hmmm... I don't know why but this sounded like a song to me. a very very short song, but in any case I liked it. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was sad. I really liked it though!! Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I feel like this sometimes with someone in my life too and its irritating but i just dont know what to do about it. Great poem...short and sweet is always nice  |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Wonderful poem! I enjoyed the read. Keep posting! *Jennifer |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was really good, I loved the way you closed it. Keep writing, and smile... ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this one, I think you expressed your thoughts very well, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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