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Lonely Adolesant Loser Girl (LALG)
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Lonely Adolesant Loser Girl (LALG) |
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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
*This peice I wrote while havin' a bad day. Everything was just goin' wrong so here it is: I'm the only one that can read my roller coaster feelings no one can feel what I feel or see what I see I'm just an lonely adolesant loser girl looking apon everybody Why was I made like this? A hug or a sweet kiss can make my day complete At night when I try to sleep I feel so alone. Alone. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey there, welcome to passions This is a great poem. We've all been there before. Nice job expressing your feelings. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I hope your future days are better than this one. You're not alone.....so keep rolling.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I've had days like that too. Great job in puttin all that into a few lines of words. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did really good job writing this one. I always seem to like short poems, their length seems to add to the power of the words. Great job  !< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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