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Ode to the rusty car-silly poem
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Ode to the rusty car-silly poem |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I loved that car, I did I did, Even when I kickrd the engine in, One day when it wouldn't start, I got a sledgehammer and broke off the radiator part, I felt bad, I did I did, So I apologized again and again, So I creaped in to the house, As quiet as a mouse, The next day was a bit of a shock, My car was gone what a crock, I looked for it, I did I did, Sunddenly I see my mom and I ask abot old trusty, She said "son your car was way to rusty", I had since I was eleven, Forgive me sone I sent it to the junk yard heaven. I loved that car  Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like how you wrote this, the "I did I did" was great and the beginning made me laugh. But sorry to hear old trusty got too rusty  < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
quality poem!! i loved it, i laughed i cried.. well nto cried but ya LOL well good job!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pixie is a liar, she said she cried then said she didn't....naughty girl. Anyway sorry bout the car. good poem though!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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